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wings of indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is still those dove sounds distant and yours more closely offered in indigo as if that room were some heaven edge and we had some sin to burn before entering and that leather coat you wore long knowing my eyes had removed it early on and everything else you wore special to keep the wanting from giving you chills you said once was always plenty, mostly I suspected you were afraid of confusion and how if you let your wings fully open you would never stop that kind of flying or being pinned to the wall with sigh songs ___________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ahh...my cup of morning lovely. Thanks for this ... |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh Dark.. this is exquisite.. somehow so sad and so- resigned? Loving the last few lines.. love the way you write.  Always~Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend ___________ ms Amary..not sad really, more of a replaying the edges of caution..thanks for the eyes ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you're a trip! Love your title! |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"and that leather coat you wore long knowing my eyes had removed it early on" you always have some clever, seductive line in everything you write. i love it. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You don't spark my imagination. You ignite it. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue..thanks babe _______________ slowfall, thanks for the eyes here _____________ ms ali-san, thanks little one |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the birthing of that magical time his words pierced the shell of predetermined releasing the ache of what if that demanded the sacrifice of her carefully cultivated way of seeing. Leaving Prince on the radio to sing 'this is what it sounds like when doves cry.' Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...that is what the do, doves...yes? it is a pleasure to see the woman wearing her white ropes and loving the knotting |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
my, but that's lovely, daaark~*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thannnnks darkdot |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Liked this composition. An excellent and original take on Day Tripper, among other things. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks easy1 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sometimes I'm astounded by your insights. Often I find it difficult to put words to a moment. Enjoyed this.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...you bless me ms, thank you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You know of the joys of open wings and of soaring without fear. You say it in such a captivating way, dear D. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much lady! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well..I am pretty sure I remember this feeling. You do have a way with expressing it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms cat..am always honored by your whisper, thanks ms |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
"you said once was always plenty, mostly I suspected you were afraid of confusion and how if you let your wings fully open you would never stop that kind of flying or being pinned to the wall with sigh songs" Your succulent words of seduction are addicting Dark~ [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (06-23-2010 03:44 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms for the review |
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