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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2010-06-03 10:59 AM



A cooling wind
blew down
from Calvary,

where Jesus
hung upon
a stick,

painted red
with blood

and those
in Hell
sought to
catch a breeze

I caught
a glimpse
of Hell

Once, as a child,
within a dream

Somber faces
in a dreary place

Tortured,
due to sin

Now, wishing to depend

on Jesus

for salvation
from their sufferings

Release from the heat

I awoke
and found
myself sitting
upon a church pew

in a dreary place,

filled with
somber faces

Preacher
lecturing,

shouting,
torturing,

due to sin

All around me
were fans

in the hands

of those
depending

upon Jesus

for salvation
from their suffering

Release from the heat

A cooling wind

from where
Jesus

hung upon a
paint stick

***

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2010-06-03 01:01 PM


a Baptist preacher shouted at me once and I never went back

a fine man when not in the middle of a sermon


Joe Houck
Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
2 posted 2010-06-06 11:30 AM


another great piece of writing.
i love the form you use as well in your poems. I semi stole its type of form in my last poem.

imitation is the highest form of flattery, right?

Keep flying to the sun with these gargoyle wings.
Joe Houck

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-06-06 12:48 PM


I do recall from my youth that an uaairconditioned church can be an uncomfortabkle sit when it's the late service on a hot Sunday morning.
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