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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2010-05-29 10:16 AM




The water
is much
sweeter now

Now, that you
cannot taste it

Much better
than when you
were submerged

and the water
had no taste

Everything there
is better now

Now, that you
cannot get there

Much better
than when
you were
deep within

and location
had no place

The emptiness
is much fuller now

Now, that
you've seen
the cornucopia

Much better
than the half Planck
prior to conception
of dystopia

Life there
is much more
blissful now

Now, that you're
pre premortem

Much better
than when
you arose
within

and evacuated
due to
boredom

I know you're
never get there

Only here
can you
pursue it

but do

Doer, do

For without
you

there's
really
nothing
to it.

***

© Copyright 2010 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-05-30 07:04 PM


You have done a great job here, dear Larry.

Thought provoking.

Love,
Margherita

Amaryllis
Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
2 posted 2010-05-30 08:18 PM


Quite interesting.. I had to re-read it a time or three; still not sure I`ve `got it`.. maybe that`s just me being thick! heh.  The intelligence of the author is apparant-  as is his talent.      Well done
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-05-30 08:58 PM


Loved every single thought wave, each one seemed to break,
then pick up momentum and roll into the next.

~very cool reading!

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