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Brooks M
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since 2010-05-26
Posts 19
California

0 posted 2010-05-28 02:23 AM



I know who you are born of the stars
hot rod cars and men on Mars.

A glimmer of light on a very dark night and
a ray of hope on a music note.

A song in my heart on a sunny day with a
face of an angel in every way.

Your close but far but wherever you are
I hope you know your in my heart.



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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2010-05-28 10:45 AM


Brooks, this was a sweet thought for one far away.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2010-05-28 11:55 AM


ms b...can see a little girl woman in this one..believe in santa and wearing high heels too..
Brooks M
Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19
California
3 posted 2010-05-28 11:58 AM


Thank you :-)
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2010-05-28 02:29 PM



  What a flowing rhyme!  The message is

  so upbeat and heartwarming, too.

  Thanks for sharing here.

   God bless,
     Rae

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