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Open Poetry #46

Paint your love

PrestonThePoet
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2010-01-15 06:30 PM

Look through my eyes,
Paint our hands together,
Shades of love embracing one another.
Colors tying their own knots,
Attaching me to this easel.
The miles kept us separate.
But the beauty,
Kept our fingers tight.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2010-01-15 08:29 PM

loved this

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2010-01-16 04:47 AM

Really lovely. The last two lines really made this poem for me - just brilliant.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-05-17 07:07 PM

Enjoyed...James

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

4 posted 2010-05-20 12:14 PM

A very evocative poem, especially for art lovers. Do you know Rodin's sculpture entitled "Cathedral"? It is two marble hands one can imagine curved around love. Your poem reminded me of it.

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