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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2010-05-20 04:43 PM


My Fragile Heart

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2010-05-20 05:07 PM


Love your title, love the sentiment as well as the
tenderness that is felt with each and every word.

Gosh BC, this is really pretty~

Lamar Cole
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2 posted 2010-05-21 04:59 AM


Very Nice.
threadbear
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Indy
3 posted 2010-05-21 07:52 AM


Love your work and visuals, Bill!
Somehow you write fresh insights to romance every time you write:
crisply, cleanly....something to be read and admired.
Jeff

Eusta B. Mae
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4 posted 2010-05-21 08:49 AM


BC- Beautiful! Words rich with the call of desire. This is one of my favorites of yours. ebm
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2010-05-21 11:01 AM


How absolutely captivating, dear Bill! It is both delicate and passionate, a wonderful mix born in your "fragile heart".

Love,
Margherita

suthern
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6 posted 2010-05-21 03:09 PM


You've written so many beautiful works of art... this may be the best yet! *S*
2islander2
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by the sea
7 posted 2010-05-22 12:31 PM


Hello Bill, you have so much talent and inspiration, your poem is artful and brilliantly illustrated...Thanks for the enjoyable read.

yann

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2010-05-22 02:13 PM


One of your best, Bill.
                   Ida

whisperingwalt
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9 posted 2010-05-22 03:35 PM


Very romantic and well presented...well done.
Ariana
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10 posted 2010-05-24 09:36 AM


Bill:  I agree with the others, job well done.  I love it.

Ariana

Richy
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11 posted 2010-05-25 10:28 PM


Dear Bill,

I bow to you, master of romance and all things that, well, go bump in the night :P

This was exquisite fine sire!

I want to grow up to be just like you!
Richard


vandana
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12 posted 2010-05-26 12:34 PM


good read
Toerag
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Ala bam a
13 posted 2010-05-27 11:49 AM


One of your better works Bill.
Larry C
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14 posted 2010-05-31 07:28 PM


I agree with Toe, for once. I really liked this Bill. Thanks for such a good write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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