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Open Poetry #46

Felt that cold on my neck

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

0 posted 2010-05-20 04:17 AM

Felt that cold on my neck
Who woulda thought
That cold right there was all thats left
Of a perfect night
Saw you drive away in that old car
Who woulda thought
That old car right there was the worst sight
Of a perfect night

Knew you would leave me again
Who woulda thought
That this time would forever be the end
Of a perfect night
I saw you cry the day before
Who woulda thought
The night after that day had in store
Was a perfect night

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2010-05-20 05:15 PM

Watching someone you love drive away knowing they're never coming back is like watching yourself die.

I liked this.

Very good.

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