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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-05-18 07:48 PM



Ah, drift for the moment with the tide of sweet nothings
of flirtations, and sweet feelings
a turn on or two

tease the fantasies of words
nibbling the ears
the coy, the sly
the ying and yang of playfulness

how she smells like roses
how she can smell you in a room

knowing that you're there
out of sight
but somewhere
close

and she feels...

Well, you'd have to ask her
:-)

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2010-05-19 07:04 PM


Nice...James
Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-20 10:27 AM


ah.. the Dance! You called it so well. ebm
SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
3 posted 2010-05-20 05:07 PM


"drift for the moment with the tide of sweet nothings"

you had me from line one.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2010-05-20 05:09 PM


This is a beauty, and lingers so sweetly~

I really enjoy reading your poetry, martini man~

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