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Rise of the Morning Star
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Rise of the Morning Star |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Rise of the Morning Star In my inner most thoughts Where birth is given To my many emotions I yearn for something Thatwords can’t express And addictions can’t suppress So I continue to walk forward Past my many illusions That yell for my attention Awareness lights my path Upon the darkness of my dysfunction I yearn to be free But bondage has its comforts Yet my soul cries out For another way of being And far on the horizon As my heart beats with hope The Morning Star rises elegantly And the darkness of night Gives way to the dawn... ...of Love that comesto heal. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An enjoyable piece. Just a note, watch your word spacing. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Andrew, Glad you enjoyed it...you are right on my spacing..thanks for the feedback.WW |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
No problem... we Canadians need to look out for each other. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I enjoyed this very much, I connected with it in many ways. thanks. ebm |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
EBM, Glad you enjoyed it and connected with.WW |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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