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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2010-05-09 09:54 AM

I am in awe, miracle of blossoms
almond buds, sing me to them
transmitting sweet mountain meadows
tall emerald green
lazy brook whispering gurgling sonnets
remarkable things,
hours that speak
air so boisterous pauses to embrace me
with mysticism
uncomplaining, persistent
bleached with pine colored vines
jeweled moths of waxoned bells
swaying from side to side
warmed by some flower drenched sweetness

Happy Mother's Day

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2010-05-09 07:49 PM

Lee J!

   So good to read your poetry again!  This is absolutely beautiful in image and sound--so musical!   What a treat it was to me after being away for a while to come to the blue pages and see your name.

   Hugs,
misce'

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2010-05-09 10:27 PM

Sing me to them...indeed.

Well done.

Happy Mother's Day, my friend.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2010-05-10 02:00 AM

Beautiful, LeeJ! Such a treat as my land turns brown and leaves litter the ground.

Hugs
Helen

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

4 posted 2010-05-10 02:05 AM

Lovely poem. A real treat to read. Your really can turn words into pictures and music. Thank you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-05-10 07:42 AM

still she is there with her hand on my shoulder shirt on...kewl stuff ms Leej

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2010-05-10 05:11 PM

Yo LeeJ,

This is nice stream of consciousness work.

Bobby

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 2010-05-10 10:27 PM

Nice feel

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

8 posted 2010-05-13 12:09 PM

Very nice imagery.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2010-05-13 09:27 AM

Such vivid imagery, like 3D on the page or a film show that only works in the mind, thank you....

Goldenrose.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-05-13 10:28 AM

Beautiful, just beautiful!ebm

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

11 posted 2010-05-13 12:44 PM

It's a talent to make one almost smell the trees and flowers from just reading...and you've done that.

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

12 posted 2010-05-13 01:56 PM

Very nice read...Like a ride to a happy place...well done.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2010-05-15 01:04 AM

Wonderful...James

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