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Namyh
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0 posted 2010-05-03 06:20 PM


Timelessness

Even when the elements split the earth in me
and fling my crumblings into the scattered emptiness
of worlds ground to crushed chaos and smashed collision,
your Love will be my beacon thru the rubble
blinking in the nothingness,
dodging past the brokenness
and guiding me 'til end of Time.

And when Night caves in from stars sucked out
by Age, leaving days and shattered suns
slipping down Eternity at a million midnights per second,
your Love will be my flame in the black wind
blistering in the coldness,
emblazing me with boldness
and fusing me to your Love divine.

And when I measure my Life,
not by the number of breaths I take
but by your moments which take my breaths away
and not by the number of aches I’ve caged in heartbreaks
but by your conquest of my plundered ones set free.
Breathless ! may be the light of all precious stones
but only your Love shines the polished gem of me.

For I’m stained glass, lost at night,
with a longing waiting mindless
in a trembling fingered blindness
for that moment rendered timeless
when your Love dawns the darkness
and I bathe in shafts of Light.

Namyh



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OldBuddyOldPal
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1 posted 2010-05-03 06:36 PM


Wow!! Left me breathless!
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2010-05-03 09:09 PM


Such a beautiful love poem, you certainly conveyed the timelessness that endures when one has loved so deeply...
the depth of emotions touched my heart in every way.

Truly, exquisite poetry!!  

Namyh
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3 posted 2010-05-04 07:36 PM


OldBuddyOldPal – What scribbler of words could ask for more than to leave the reader breathless. Thanks OBOP. Namyh
Namyh
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4 posted 2010-05-04 07:37 PM


BluesSeranade- Any heart enraptured by another heart has a vibrant ceaseless rhythm. The body may crumble and fall apart but we hope the love lives on and transcends time and space. It may end when it reaches Infinity but will still have enough momentum to vibrate one more step beyond. Such is the hope of the human heart. So very happy it touched yours. Namyh  
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