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Open Poetry #46

The Night Wind

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-04-27 05:17 PM

The night wind sings a song of love.
It carries the spirits of sweethearts.
To the heavens above.

The night wind blows sweet romance.
Upon its breezes.
The souls of lovers dance.

The night wind blows very cool.
Tonight, love and romance rule.

Trapped - Nothing
Member

since 2010-04-25

Posts 52

1 posted 2010-04-27 11:35 PM

This is so classy, I bet your a real ladies man. Do you have a book!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2010-04-29 11:11 AM

"The night wind blows sweet romance.
Upon its breezes.
The souls of lovers dance"

I like this stanza...it gives the reader a chance to sigh and breathe in your meanings...enjoyed

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