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Open Poetry #46

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martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-04-27 03:59 PM

Did you tell your troubles to the moon
Did she smile and wink back at you

did you climb the Castle hill
and wade the river of blood that followed the thrill

did you ride the tempest wind
and set the jib to sail again

did you tell the story from beginning to end
and laugh when calling fate your friend

did you seek what all have sought
and learn the lesson that God has taught

if you haven't you may begin again
rinse repeat, and live again my friend

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2010-04-29 11:08 AM

this is excellent...surprised there are not more comments on it...excellent write

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

2 posted 2010-04-29 11:15 AM

Nice Poem.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2010-04-29 04:50 PM

thanks guys. Im not one of the most popular poets here and I wasnt writing much early this year. and this isnt one of my best pieces, but I like the message. Thanks for commenting

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