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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-04-25 12:09 PM

I found your love today,
hidden in an old, worn coat,
stuck down deep in my pocket,
there it was, a small note,

Something simple,
something silly,
your handwritting,
my gentle fingers,

touched it softly,
smelling it,
I remembered
that night,
just you and I,

Sitting ontop of green blankets,
star lights strung across night sky,
twinkling in our love crossed eyes,
suddenly like a fallen star,

You kissed me, I cried,
you collected my tears,
they fell inside your hands,
you sprinkled the earth,

watering it with our love,
this little note a scribbled poem,
few are the words, magic,
they will remain forever in my heart!

I opened the note, you were there,
for that moment it was like the first time,
that I had read it, I smiled ear to ear,
but my eyes still cried, for I miss you so!

Will my words stick like glue to your heart? it is the paste that keeps us together~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2010-04-26 10:00 AM

you described the magic of memories so aptly...excellent read...thank you for sharing

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 2010-04-26 12:38 PM

This is a touching telling poem of the pathos of love-- and the remnants of it that linger on in our heart and life.

Well done!

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2010-04-26 06:24 PM

Romantic Heart - Amazing it is how a smell makes us recall old moments, a taste recalls yesterdays' banquets and the feel of a piece of paper erupts to the mind an old love. Only the romantic heart of a poet's pen can remind us so well. I enjoyed this muchly RH. Namyh

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-04-28 08:58 AM

This was great ARH. I could visualize the story unfolding in my eyes.
Very well done.
One of my favorites of yours.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

5 posted 2010-04-28 07:35 PM

Loved this one RH.

Zeitgeist.

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

6 posted 2010-04-29 11:26 AM

Very Heartfelt

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