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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2010-04-22 04:11 PM


Bones find his life to be
much improved
since he’s grown up
and educated.  

He’s pulling in scads of bread,
and no one is even hurting his body
anymore.  

He just wishes he had had
the opportunity to grow up faster.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-22-2010 04:46 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2010-04-23 01:18 PM


Education plays an essential role in our lives and I am glad that Bones enjoys a cushy life now.

The lessons in life can be tough and sometimes we would surely like to accelerate time, you are right, dear Bobby.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2010-04-23 02:50 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

For your understanding, and very kind words.

Love Bobby

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96

3 posted 2010-04-23 06:06 PM


"pulling in scads of bread"

this line is a winner in my heart.
these bones poems are quirky almost like a comic strip

there are times when I ask myself, is he talking to me?
take care  

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
4 posted 2010-04-23 06:12 PM


Some... it's too fast. Others... not fast enough. We're lucky if it's just right.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2010-04-23 09:37 PM


Thanks dear Laverne,

I'm always talking to you Hon.  I hope you are enjoying hearing about Bones.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2010-04-23 09:39 PM


Thanks Andrew,

I'm so happy to be old.  Old is best.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
7 posted 2010-04-25 08:31 AM


You send out a powerful message about the importance of education with this addition.  
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2010-04-25 05:14 PM


Thanks Earl,

I hope you like the message.

Bobby

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