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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2010-04-22 11:27 AM


I think I might need a drink
Though I’d rather not drink alone.
I’m ready to give her a ring
Though she never picks up her phone.
I’m ready to tie the knot -
The rope on my neck doesn’t faze me.
She loves me? She loves me not?
I torture flies when I can’t find daisies.


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-04-22 01:34 PM


Poor flies and daisies! You are ready and that says it all. No doubt such a big change (for the better) in life is a good occasion for a drink. Champagne for two then!

Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

OldBuddyOldPal
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since 2008-12-15
Posts 87

2 posted 2010-04-22 05:46 PM


Short but sweet and says so much!!
Good luck.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-04-22 06:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2010-04-22 11:45 PM




excellent work

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