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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2010-04-14 04:04 AM



Nothing goes along
except the right and the wrong,
the words are asleep.

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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
1 posted 2010-04-14 11:09 AM


Why's wrong so easy?
Right is quite a bit harder,
Until afterwards.

2islander2
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2 posted 2010-04-15 04:14 AM


LngJhnAg
thanks for the poetic comment, a beautiful poem just at purpose? great lines.

regards

yann

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