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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-04-12 02:00 PM

How time can make love grow
No matter how far apart you go
And all the things you do
Whenever we steal a moment or two
How pain seems somehow to mend
When we have reached the end
And have only ourselves once more
No one to blame, no one to scar
It’s such a sad thing which will never be
This connection between you and me
Why must I look in the mirror
And see myself getting unclearer
There’s got to be a reason or some rhyme
For my not being with you in time
But frozen and etched upon your brain
Echoing what might have been in every rain
There’s got to be some sort of place
For us to live face to face
Where we can be together
And not worry about the weather
And not a care in the world
Just you and me, a boy and girl
No one else needs to know
Nothing else matters in this place we go
It’s a way of making dreams deliverable
It’s the only way of making this life liveable

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 2010-04-12 08:31 PM

"But frozen and etched upon your brain
Echoing what might have been in every rain
There’s got to be some sort of place
For us to live face to face
Where we can be together
And not worry about the weather"

For some reason, I really like these lines.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-04-13 08:15 AM

Thank you Andrew.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2010-04-15 07:02 AM

Would you keep me if you had me?

LOL just kidding I don't know who this poem is for but it sure is passionate!

~ARH

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-04-15 12:31 PM

There’s got to be a reason or some rhyme
For my not being with you in time

~*~

This brought fond memories of
Somewhere in Time

where fantasy gives hope a vision.

Very good, Jerry. Enjoyed this very much.

Eterne
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2010-07-21 03:47 AM

"How time can make love grow
No matter how far apart you go
And all the things you do
Whenever we steal a moment or two
How pain seems somehow to mend
When we have reached the end
And have only ourselves once more"

So true!
I like your poem.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

6 posted 2010-07-22 11:39 AM

Good write, I can relate. EBM

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