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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2010-04-12 06:24 AM




Aardvark, Aardvark,
sitting on a log.
Why do you look
so much like a dog?

Platypus, Platypus,
climbing up a tree.
Why do you sit there,
meowing at me?

Jiva John Phenomenon
can never be alone.

Things just seem
to follow him
wherever he may roam.

He sometimes finds
peace of mind
in blaming Jiva Joan

God knows

how she
creates things
in her head.

***

© Copyright 2010 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2010-04-13 08:58 PM


almost sounds like you wrote this while visiting Alice down the rabbit's hole... I loved it, though...thought it was very cleverly written...enjoyed
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