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What is truly forever, I wondered
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What is truly forever, I wondered |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
What is truly forever, I wondered as a child. I thought it meant mother and father would lived their days together with me but they went their separt ways. What is truly forever, i wondered when i was in my grandparents arms in such warmth but soon they turned so cold and numb. What is truly forever, I wondered as I played thru the nights with friends that I could trust yet betrayed, deserted me when things went south. What was truly forever, I wondered when my heart was lifted in splendor of the love we shared that made me truly believe that this could be forever. But alas even you trailed your way from this love we bared, that's when I truly relized that forever can't always stay. But I will try my best to hold on to this word for forever's sake. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
As Peggy Lee said once upon a time, "Is that all there is to that?" You said it almost as well, if not better. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very profound and powerful poem that flowed wonderfully There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ken, Our thoughts and thinking are alike tonight. Well done, Sir! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
JerryPat2- Thank you, some of it was inspired from that.  Faithmairee- Glad you enjoyed the flow of the poem thanks for reading.  Sunshine- Then we must be well tuned then. also this ken is a miss. Names Juanita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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