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spiked
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0 posted 2011-02-22 01:36 AM


Passions sound
Is heard in clicks
Screams abound
The perfect fix
For feeling through
The vibrant touch
A Very few
Can give as much
Clenching squirm
To get away
Too much to take
Desires play
Played into
My hands again
Can't pull away
I will defend
The honor of
This storied game
Breaking realms
You cannot tame
A fire burnt
Right through your soul
You realize
I've gained control
And off we start again

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1 posted 2011-02-26 02:21 AM


I have read this a couple of times now, and I really like how it reads.

Alison

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2 posted 2011-02-26 05:52 PM


loved it
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3 posted 2011-03-06 10:28 PM


Yes lets
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