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DrinaLove
Junior Member

since 2010-12-23

Posts 30
California

0 posted 2011-01-02 12:25 PM

While you’re playing with the sand

Making fantasy castles, creating

The perfect princess and prince charming

The happily ever after to your life, waiting

For the enchanted godmother, to come pass her wand

Over your wishes, maybe it will come

I see you in the distance remembering you once

As I leave to be in search, to find out

To make waves in the water, to wonder what’s under all that

Excavating so deep, to my surprise I find

Another world that was lost and forgotten about

My Atlantis I’ve formed and created but destroyed with my thoughts

Making waves, reviving what was once

Snap, snap back into reality

You play in the sand, and I run off

Making waves so high hoping it will snap me back

Reality, stand up and over the sand

If only life was a beach but it’s not

The waves call me by name, so there I go

Off am gone

The old me, to unite with what I’m hoping to be

Found

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-02 09:01 AM

Seek and you shall find.

When early morning quietness seeps into my being
it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2011-01-02 10:03 AM

Welcome to Passions, Drina...
Please check your email
for a Very Special Welcome!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-01-02 11:02 AM

Being a seaside woman, I love the analogies,
the cleansing, and pure simple beauty that your poem conveys.

The ocean waves are healing indeed.

Welcome to Passions, DrinaLove~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-01-02 02:46 PM

Good stuff, off you go!
Enjoy the beauty of it all from a different angle every day.
I enjoyed this very much.
Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-01-02 05:06 PM

Welcome to Pip! This is a very nice first offering really.

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

6 posted 2011-01-02 08:45 PM

Welcome,enjoyed your poem.latearrival

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2011-01-02 10:42 PM

I like to explore, but I tend to leave a trail of bread crumbs ...

DrinaLove
Junior Member

since 2010-12-23

Posts 30
California

8 posted 2011-01-04 05:00 AM

Thnx. I hope this is the beggining of many more to come

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-01-04 03:16 PM

welcome to the bluezoo drina...

some beaches suck and some don't..such is life...enjoyed your post ms

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2011-01-09 09:58 PM

:Enjoyed...James

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