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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-02-13 09:39 PM


into the pewter,
a sprinkle of lavender lent
each dusk
of ages past--will my love
outlast such sacrifice
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..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony
..first in Sketchbook 5-5 SepOct 2010
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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-02-13 09:55 PM


another wonderful one...very nicely done

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-02-14 02:28 PM


A beautiful and meaningful ritual (and, of course, the poem is correspondingly beautiful).  I believe it will, but that it will experience a rebirth in an incomprehensible accord.

Owl

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