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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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0 posted 2011-02-11 03:20 AM


at the lake,
not even seaside embraces
find our arms longing...
lakeside tranquility has merits
clouds, kissing crests, sing of
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..channeled; spirit Harmony
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easy1
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1 posted 2011-02-11 04:15 AM


Very good. "Music, sweet music..."
Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2011-02-11 07:58 PM


..thanks easy1..>>kind of you to read
and to kindly comment..>>spiros
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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-02-11 09:08 PM


Aww the tranquil serenity floats among these pages blue.

Love the pure essence~

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2011-02-11 09:32 PM


..thanks BluesSerenade..>>how kind of you
to comment so pleasantly..!
..>>spiros
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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2011-02-11 11:55 PM


Dreamy, Spiros . . . yes, lake Lamartine moods – and none can paint them as Spiros, Lamartine and lakesides can.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2011-02-12 12:09 PM


..O Owl, 'tis you, you, who is
the praiseworthy poet..>>spiros

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2011-02-13 03:17 AM


Why, then, Spiros, do I linger longer in YOUR poems?

Owl

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