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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-02-10 12:20 PM


I was not the intentional seaman there
drifting too close to her enchantments
as the siren song she soothed into my timbers
turned them into the splintering of designs

perhaps it was her voice above the waves
seeming safe in harbor for my crashing bow
even though her curves would breach my will
and shudder my mast from its most rigid pride

or perhaps it was her pale pleasure writhing
temptation jutting bold into horizons parted brim
stirring my demons into her panting verve
then pressing me face down between  her tides

and then that liquor from her frothing illusion
like the cologne applied to the dead men’s skin
as she soaked my panting ink into blotless dim
and rode my bones until her stones were whet

and I was the stick used to polish her diamond


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daark

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bel1e
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1 posted 2011-02-10 12:36 PM


earplugs....probably the easier solution....LOL...but not as fun...

~~love your poems~~~

xoxox

             

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-02-10 01:04 PM


thanks bbgirl...I had in the ear plugs but got caught reading her lips..
bel1e
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3 posted 2011-02-10 04:38 PM


earplugs...and a blindfold?+chinese food & peanut butter = an unforgettable equation~*~*

LMAO

~just call my sticky

             

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-02-10 05:32 PM


Nah. That bait and switch ain't working this time, buddy. I'm still holding on to the original plan, man. I'm not going back, Jack. I'm here to stay, Ray.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-02-10 07:14 PM


double entendre…more like octuple entendre (or more)
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-02-11 07:05 AM


babybel1e..I would call you anytime..

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jp, thanks guy

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steavenr, thanks my friend

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2011-02-11 09:01 PM


Hey, just like having a woman in every port.

lol...yank yank yank.  

No seriously, this is really beautiful, like getting caught in the perfect storm.  

Hugs, D~

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-02-12 07:13 AM


babyblue..thank you for looking sideways at this..
ethome
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9 posted 2011-02-12 03:22 PM


Man this is so hot I'll have to have laser eye surgery done.....burnt a hole straight through my gaurded innocence by way of the pupils.....

Imagine that used to be a diamond in the rough...What a service you render.

You're so good bad!

Put him in a log boat til he's sober.....Whew!

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2011-02-14 02:13 PM


I am blushing now and that is quite feat to make me blush!!! And right to the end I thought we were talking about a ship!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-02-14 02:35 PM


eric...I was watching swamp loggers at the time..kinda..thanks guy


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ms angel, you always blush, that biker babe innocent kind of blush..thanks babe

Martie
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12 posted 2011-02-14 06:54 PM


DS....An unintentional seaman making one of a kind jewels, one poem at a time.
Sunshine
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13 posted 2011-02-14 07:43 PM


Now this
needs to be set
into a touchstone.



But I did have to think
were you ever intentioned
at all?



I loved it!

HVD, D


Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2011-02-14 08:16 PM


Ah dark, when you speak of her curves and songs, it is always a treat for the eyes.

So glad to have popped in here on Vday.  Hope yours was a happy one. ~D

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2011-02-15 07:32 AM


ms martie, thanks little neighbor..

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ms sun, you make me imagine veils, thank you

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ms GS, thank you lady friend

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16 posted 2011-02-20 02:06 AM


Well, I can't think of anything witty to add that has not been said already.  Just know that you make me want to break out in song.  Not a bad place to be on a cold night.

Ali-san

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