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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2011-02-10 12:20 PM

Daydreams and Superglue

You know all the great composers
You call them out, each by their name
So I listen, The music is loud
You make your point, You know each note
How each pause moves, A treble too.

I watch you face, self satisfied
You move your hands through out the air
Oh how you compose like it's your own
I could never know it like you

I will give my apology
I was simply distracted

Apparently
When dust passed by a window pane
I remembered when I was small:
I found my mother's super glue
Soon, so did everyone else...

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2011-02-10 02:41 AM

Well-expressed and thought provoking! Such spoilers aren't necessary at a concert... Of course, poetry and critique thereof can be like that, in certain moods. I assume the superglue did not cause permanent injury, and for that this reader is glad.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-02-10 07:12 AM

Ha! Boredom will cause us to do drastic things to amuse.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2011-02-10 08:24 AM

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Very good Juju

I always read you

John

PS Read it again. Please with your permission
let me add this to my Word file of poems by others;
it will make great company.

.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2011-02-10 09:10 AM

Thank you everyone for replies

John, you may put that with your collection. What do you want me to check?

Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-02-10 02:34 PM

almost watching your expression as you pen this...enjoyed the post ms

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-02-10 06:55 PM

an odd mix, but a very well written piece...so much like the subject you were describing...lots of smiles, too (and that is always good)

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