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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-09 04:11 PM




Slow death by default
deciding not to decide
past the point of putting off
procrastinating
down the path
of least resistance
holding on to
deadly habits

LGR(C)2/9/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-02-09 04:28 PM


A lot of us have been guilty of hanging on by our teeth to these deadly, sometimes illegal, habits. Like this.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-02-09 04:41 PM


yes and the older you get the more stuff they tell you will kill you too.

lori

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (02-09-2011 08:51 PM).]

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-02-09 05:27 PM


nice work as always, Lori...enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2011-02-09 05:58 PM


Now just appreciate the alliteration...
but, more, please.


steavenr
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5 posted 2011-02-09 07:11 PM


have you been looking over my shoulder?   nice write...a library of knowledge in few words...loved it
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
6 posted 2011-02-10 12:29 PM


I liked this

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

graying1
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since 2011-02-09
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The Commonwealth of VA
7 posted 2011-02-10 06:11 AM


I've done this
far too many times
enjoyed reading this

PS

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
8 posted 2011-02-10 09:38 AM


Sunshine-you slave driver you!
___________________________________________
Faith-it is always so good to see you, thank you
___________________________________________
Steaven I have been looking over your shoulder, didn't you know I'm omnipotent?
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Hey Juju, glad you liked it thanks for letting me know
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G1 thanks for being here too! Glad you liked it.
Lori

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