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His Voice
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His Voice |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He spoke her name and she felt his voice inside her Never before had she been thrilled like this It didn’t sound the same when it passed his lips. She was shaken and awakened to a sensation new Little did she know what that voice could do… laying awake at night wondering what to do |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is really cool because it is open to all kinds of imaginings as to who the voice is, and is generally well done. Awesome. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once the voice got in there and the connecions were made the voice skipped over long distances to prompt you to write a poem like this. Take Care Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, you say it in a most captivating way, what certain voices can do. Love, Margherita  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
your first line drew me in and the rest of the words kept me captivated until the poem ended...great diction and flow to this wonderful poem...nice work, gal! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed... ~Coco~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If they had to give one of their senses up, many say hearing - but just imagine what it would be like if you couldn't hear his voice again... enjoyed, j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I have a feeling you will figure out what to do. It's either wait for the voice to come back, or go looking for it. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
The voice of destiny. Well done Lori. I love poems that although complete still leave voids for the reader to fill in. You made my inagination flow. Write On, Marcia |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very powerful poem, Lori...the ending was perfect...great job, my friend Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
some voices are powerful and they bear emotions like no other ones, we can only guess what they are, not why, thanks lori for the beautiful poem, yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Fine writing, Lori. Ida |
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