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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2011-02-01 10:28 PM

I've seen enough to know
I've seen enough
started killing time
and now it won't stop

I smear the truth in blurrs
eyes are wide shut
once in a lifetime
truths all tied in knots

I'm losing me, I'm gone
lost in the crowds
nothing else is left
pride is for the proud

and I've seen enough to know
I've seen enough
Yes, it's my time now
theres no where left but up

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-02-01 10:46 PM

This is an awesome poem. I know a lot of people today feel like this. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-02-01 11:05 PM

Massive wordplay here, Trina. You got down in the ditch and wallowed a bit, and now, as you said, it is time to reach for the "up" button and take it to the limit.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-01 11:38 PM

very finely penned as usual...i enjoy your work a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-02-02 12:30 PM

this one works on the mind on several levels...found it to be an extremely good write

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2011-02-02 09:02 AM

TDA- Thanx

To the limit indeed Jerry Thanx.

Thanx Faith

Ah, You're too kind Steavenr, Thanx for looking in.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-02-02 11:20 AM

Wow, Trina! I was getting so worried all the way through your poem and so ready to email you to cheer you up and try to help, but then came that last word! Wow, again! Congrats!

Owl

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2011-02-02 11:23 AM

It's a tremendous feeling to circle back to the "get me outta here!" moment. I don't care for that dark, dank place either, but it is a wonderful feeling to come back up to the fresh air, because I really don't believe that any human might escape from the confines of the dungeon now and again.

Good job, Trina!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2011-02-03 09:44 AM

Thanx Owl, for your kind words and thoughts.

Thanx Sunshine!

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

9 posted 2011-02-05 11:35 PM

I suppose we all have moments when we are fed up with things in life. I guess during those times it is important to step back from ourself and focus on our priorities.

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