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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-01 02:58 PM

i love life-
and yet i couldn't live
in a world without love

and you-
i will love you always
for you are more precious
to me than life itself

loving you comes easily
and leaving you
i m p o s s i b l e

yet should you ever fall out
of love with me please tell me-
but tell it to me gently

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-02-01 04:02 PM

Saying you are no longer in love with someone, no matter how "gentle" you try to say it, it hardly ever is accepted in the same manner. Then again, saying it is better than letting her find it out for herself.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-02-01 07:03 PM

Jerry's right...don't think there is an upside to this dilemma...hurts any ways you approach it...excellent write that moves the reader right along...nicely done

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-01 08:07 PM

JerryPat-You are right. Thanks so much for your comments.

Steavenr-Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I'm honored by them.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-02-01 08:15 PM

There is no easy way to say goodbye. Enjoyed1
Kat >^..^<

To live is to love
To love is to live

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-02-01 08:25 PM

yes, that's true...thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem...

btw...i love your signature...it reminds me a bit of one of my favorite sayings "Whatever you do, do it with love."

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-02-01 10:26 PM

Right to the heart Faith.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-02-01 11:58 PM

Thanks so much, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2011-02-02 12:09 PM

awe, this is a little sad but I liked it

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

9 posted 2011-02-02 12:11 PM

thanks...i'm glad you liked it

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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