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Valentine |
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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
I'm up in time to read you post Let me say good night The end of my heart is in the stars A honest disguise keeps me from being in your eyes I want to keep quiet my valentine Ill just pass on by Keep me away Ill let you keep your time I want to run away Can i keep your eyes? He has your heart as i cry Let me miss you tonight Let me say good bye Well lets run away Lets take a ride My dreams are making me feel so alone I dont understand why |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is an awesome poem. I like the way you convey your feelings in this piece. I truly enjoyed the read!!!  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"An honest disguise keeps me from being in your eyes" ...really liked this line...intriguing in an interesting work |
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