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flooding river |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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forbidden waters makes one weak a drowning man knows no peace flooding river winding down like a warden grants no release flooding river gonna take my home leave me naked and alone mean old river so unkind shows no mercy leaves nothin' behind There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Man this fits those poor folks in Australia. Great writing, it flows just like a river and has some real passion in it. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i am honored by your wonderful remark...thank you so much. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep, I was thinking of the hell they are having in Australia myself as I read this well-written poem dirge. ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
thank you for your wonderful comments...i appreciate them There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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