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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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0 posted 2011-12-11 09:26 PM



We live within our dreams

of fantasies released

into each other's reach

the voices of our soul.
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EML


© Copyright 2011 E. M. L. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-12-11 09:31 PM


You have culled the intricacies of life into a four-line poem, and gave us the reason for our seasons. Very well done.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2011-12-11 09:34 PM


Thank you JP, your comment means alot.
Ms. E

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2011-12-12 12:56 PM


Wise words, Edna.
            Ida

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-12-12 01:50 PM


Very nice , my friend...enjoyed this and One Way Dream....

j.

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
5 posted 2011-12-12 01:52 PM


you speak of a sweet place to live
ebonygirl
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6 posted 2011-12-13 03:02 PM


Ida,
Thank you for reading,
I admire the wisdom in your poems as well.
E

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-12-13 05:42 PM


JWesley and Emma Rose Thank you for taking the time to read the poem.
Ms. E

Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2011-12-13 06:35 PM


This is a little gem, dear Ebonygirl.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2011-12-13 06:41 PM


Oh Margherita, Thank you for visiting, your voice makes me smile. My mom is sick and I know of the healing light you send out is powerful.
Ms. E  

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
10 posted 2011-12-14 04:29 PM


Too beautiful, just too beautiful.
Love this heartfelt poem.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-12-15 10:06 AM


ms E...quiet holds mystery...whispers hold pleasure.  enjoyed this ms
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