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The Road Ahead
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The Road Ahead |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Unthreaded the loom of life Revealing words unspoken Like a spell cast upon those Who are starry eyed incomplete So subtle the movement A mere ripple in a sea of time Contemplate this gentle stillness Calm the maelstrom in my heart Restore my crumbling psyche With naught but wisps of hope My house of cards collapsing With the burden Of a thousand wrongs Winding is this endless road No beginning nor end Until I sever the bonds with the Shackles of Misery It will be A very lonely road to take... Like Night needs Day |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Just Lil Old Me... Very interesting write. I very much liked this, but must admit it is sort of deep which I also like. I hope you find happiness at the end of the road.Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Poetry, Psychology, Philosophy, Cooking, Travel" With such interest how can you be sad or lonely? Love your work,but waiting for a smile. Best to you,jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Until I sever the bonds with the Shackles of Misery It will be A very lonely road to take..." Again, great writing. (((BUT))) with heartbreaking sadness. Maybe at the crossroads you take a right and change course?  JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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