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Open Poetry #47

no way 'home'

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2011-01-23 04:30 PM

no way ‘home’

bright moon
river of stars
Winter wind
at sunset
over cold waters …
sole companions
down the fragile hours
of the empty heart
past love’s redemption

--- b. e. adams (1/23/2011)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2011-01-23 05:24 PM

Bruce....The imagery in this gave me chills...sending warm hugs

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-23 05:54 PM

Awesome poem!!!! I could see all this in my mind and it made me shiver with cold. LOL

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-01-23 06:38 PM

Reminds me of a still and stary night, when all one hears is their own heart beat.

You're good, dreampoet~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-23 07:57 PM

wow...what a descriptive write that describes its title so well...nicely done

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-01-23 08:05 PM

Stunningly beautiful for all it's sadness, Bruce. I think it is one of your best.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2011-01-24 04:48 AM

brilliant Bruce, with short words the power of the haunting past. thanks for the superb poem.

yann

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