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Open Poetry #47

One Flute

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-01-23 01:01 PM

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One flute—

Her small white sock
In the dresser drawer

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JerryPat
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1 posted 2011-01-23 03:16 PM

This begs the question, where is she?

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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2 posted 2011-01-23 03:31 PM

Interesting piece but I like it.

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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

3 posted 2011-01-23 08:23 PM

Hmmmm? Not sure I understand.

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2011-01-23 11:09 PM

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Thanks for reading.

The idea is of an image/event,
(finding one sock), eliciting
a tune in the mind ; in that way
the sock becomes the flute
playing softly . . .

Thanks again

John

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ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-01-24 12:42 PM

Thanks for the explanation John

Very creative idea. Sometimes it doesn't take many words.

Eric

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