navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Miracles
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic Miracles Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina

0 posted 2011-01-23 10:16 AM




The gentle opening of a butterflies wings
As she prepares to take off in flight
The warmth of a candle flickering
On a cold and snowy winter's night

The sound of a baby's laughter
As it softly meets your ear
The beauty of a new born puppy curled up
Will surely bring a happy tear

Life is full of so much wonder
Everyday is a miracle for us to unfold
Still life is also a mystery
For us to enjoy and hold

As I go out on my journey today
I will see loved ones who make me smile
Making every single second count
For we only have a little while....



"we have but a moment...only one moment"

© Copyright 2011 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-23 10:36 AM


This is a wonderful little poem full of the richness of life and the fact that most people, me included I'm afraid, fail to observe and love.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-01-23 11:43 AM


Hey, hi there Amy~  Love your poem and your spirit.

Life is short and a precious gift, indeed~  

faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-01-23 11:53 AM


love the message in your nicely penned poem...that's a great photo you have accompanying it...enjoyed it much!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
4 posted 2011-01-23 11:54 AM


This is very beautifully written. This poem was full of imagery.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
5 posted 2011-01-23 11:59 AM


This belongs on a Hallmark Card

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

always4real
Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31
A yankee that lives in NC
6 posted 2011-01-23 12:16 PM


Yes,

Miss Amy You should be writing for
Hallmark cards!

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
7 posted 2011-01-23 12:52 PM


Hallmark huh? You guys are flattering...thanks!

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
8 posted 2011-01-23 12:56 PM


Oh no, flattery is for the waitress so she doesn't drop your steak on the floor before it's served. This is good writing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2011-01-23 02:54 PM


Beautiful , uplifting poem we all need to think about, amk377.
                           Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
10 posted 2011-01-24 12:31 PM


I loved this, Amy.  The photo is beautiful too.  The tree/bush is reminiscent of one of our indigenous trees here in South Africa, called Caledendron capense.  I would have to check my tree books to notice differences.  I wonder if your tree and ours is related.  

Owl

amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
11 posted 2011-01-28 09:29 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments! Owl, I'd be interested to know that too...let me know...

Amy

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Miracles

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary