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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-13 10:20 PM


Fall leaves fall down
They touch the ground
And make a mound

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-14 07:22 AM


I wanted to respond with something witty in rhyme but it's too early I'm having trouble just typing my friend so I'll just say Good Morning to you, enjoyed your Haiku!
Lori

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-10-14 07:24 AM


And Margherita wants to dance upon that mound and launch those leaves once again into the air for a last wild whirly pleasure before ... before the silence catches them.

Inspiring, Jerry.

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-10-14 07:53 AM


It is okay about the witty rhyme, Lori, I'm poking around with one finger on the keyboard and still making mistakes and having to go back and change them. Thank you for being here.

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Margherita , you go ahead and take a long, running jump and said through the air, landing my my neatly piled leave and scatter them will-nilly, my rake is ready for the task of piling them up again. Appreciate the kind words.

EmmaRose
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4 posted 2011-10-14 01:17 PM


i love to dance and run through the mounds
with out without shoes

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-10-14 01:19 PM


Hah! You can join Margherita, as she does her thing EmmaRose. Thank you for being here among the fallen leaves.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JL
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6 posted 2011-10-14 02:31 PM


I kind of agree with EmmaRose, except I watch as others pile up leaves and run through them.
Enjoyed your "Fall" in review.

JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-10-14 03:03 PM


Yep, we all have our thoughts about the fallen leaf, JL, and thank you for yours, and for being here to share them.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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