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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-10-07 06:38 AM



I felt you standing behind me
when I was behind you at the candy store
looking in the window that way

saying what your favorites were
out loud with whispers I could hear
but you pretended it wasn't you

we traded places for moments then
you said you would do anything I wanted
but that it was me saying those things

and in reality I would have to ask you
nicely before you would give in
and just a glance might be nice enough

since you had already shown me where to look


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1 posted 2011-10-07 08:23 AM


How could I resist such a title? *S* I stand a chance of grace in such a dance... as long as my feet don't have to move! LOL

Thanks for the smile on this day when I want to be almost anywhere but work. LOL

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-10-07 08:25 AM


Ms Suthern...I think moving your feet would be more reaction than forethought...thanks lady friend
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-10-07 04:05 PM


I guess that a glance from you would indeed make words "to ask nicely" superfluous!  

glance dancing is romantically inspiring!

M


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-10-07 04:07 PM


ms Mar....thank you lady for the sweet glances here...
ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-10-08 08:26 PM


I love to dance, it is freedom for me, enjoyed your poem. Mr. D,
ms. e

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-10-08 09:05 PM


Ms E, I can imagine how you use the music. Thanks ms
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7 posted 2011-10-09 04:58 PM


You and your poetry are word candy, to be savored!!
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-10-10 09:34 AM


babyblue...hmmmm I do hope you have a sweet tooth ...thanks babe
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