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Open Poetry #47
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2011-09-27 12:19 PM




How the sunlight spills
bright white from a ladle of
blue popsicle soup!





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Michael
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1 posted 2011-09-27 12:28 PM

I wish the skies here were popsicle blue... you invoke a lovely image here.  Nicely done.


Michael
Nicole
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2 posted 2011-09-27 07:31 PM

I agree with Michael on this one - I enjoyed the imagery very much.
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3 posted 2011-09-30 09:51 PM

You make me want to pack a picnic and do some serious cloud watching!! Beautiful image!
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-09-30 09:52 PM

I like this. Nice work.

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