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Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2011-01-21 10:43 AM

Inside the Magellanic Cloud an image starts to form,
expanding it's parameters, an elemental storm.
Particulates are funneled in to swirl within its grip,
another day in paradise aboard the mothership.

Wherein the search continues for an outlet for these thoughts.
Through random coalescence my attention has been caught,
and sparks the need to ponder on the workings of some thing,
in words that sound as music, causing humble ears to ring.

A lexophile in orbit as he marvels at their sounds,
the music of their meanings and their magic know no bounds.
Miraculous in measure and momentous in their scope.
The poets' private treasure, I have given up all hope,

of leading any "normal" life 'cause when push comes to shove,
undyingly, I must confess, with words I am in love.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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1 posted 2011-01-21 11:17 AM

Share the love I say! This was delightful-I am especially fond of your topic.
Lori

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2011-01-21 11:29 AM

Me too, Dr. Moose and I love these words.
Ida

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

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Watertown, NY

3 posted 2011-01-21 01:48 PM

This is a lovely piece. Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

Balladeer

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4 posted 2011-01-21 03:16 PM

Well, I confess I've never thought of your head as the mothership although I was fairly certain there was a cloud inside....thanks for confirming it!

A poem only you could write, doc and nobody does it better. Make it so!

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-01-21 04:25 PM

how could you not love a write that uses both the words Magellanic and lexophile in it...superb (or would that be 'incommensurable')

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2011-01-21 11:16 PM

Y'had me at "meta".

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

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7 posted 2011-01-23 08:57 AM

Beam up the pieces, Scotty.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA

8 posted 2011-01-23 10:26 AM

Lori,
Thank you, I sometimes think it's "they" who have their way with me.

Doc

Ida,
Thanks for stopping by, your comments are always appreciated.

Doc

Trina,
Thanks, that's very kind of you to say.

Doc

Balladeer,
Lol, todays' forecast, partly cloudy with a chance of poetry.

Doc

steavenr,
Kind words, thank you m'friend

Doc

Serenity,
Thank you m'dear, love your sense of humor.

Doc

XgarapanX,
Lol, I'll admit to being a little "sci-fi-natical" at times. Thanks.
Doc

Martie

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9 posted 2011-01-23 05:40 PM

Doc...Love, of course...what other answer is there to any question there could ever be?

Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA

10 posted 2011-01-24 08:15 AM

Dear Martie,
Thanks for stopping by.

Doc

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