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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-21 12:33 PM


there you are deep in the woodlands
dancing where the fireflies abound
no one would even know you*re there
if it wasn*t for the baying of the hounds

you sprinkle all your magic dust
where it is needed most
the garden is your favorite spot
behind our house on the eastern coast

what you do and where you go
it matters not to me at all
i only know it thrills me so when
i watch the faries spring time ball



There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-01-21 01:34 AM


Makes me wish for spring! Nicely done!
Kat >^..^<

Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246

2 posted 2011-01-21 02:40 AM


Lovely! Your words do dance like fairy dust. Bravo!
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-21 08:12 AM


Nice tempo, beautiful words, all lead to naure at its best.

~ Clones are people two ~

faithmairee
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Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-01-21 01:16 PM


thank you all so much...i appreciate your wonderful remarks!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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