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gift of rainbows |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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was it by seduction scheme this thy rainbow toes at brim where my eyes gaze above upon those thighs of pale sky and wonder of the distance to dawns dampened heaven not a pot of gold is my mind, but but a whim of pen reclined at the end of this rainbow where contentment for gold is less than at the other end where moaning songs are rivers bliss temptation in the soft mist of morning, your shimmer lotion and then when of deeper consideration will you give the rain so my leaves are dripping ended within meadow mouths will you capture my lens at the foot edge of swallowed eve and then stand wide legged in your jaunty gown above looking down at the heathen in my heart beating blade sheathing beyond inspirations hilt, thy treasured sigh ______________ daark |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I can sense both Budo and Tantra in this write...:-) "sheathing beyond inspirations hilt, thy treasured sigh" I wish I would have said that line. Excellent poetry, as allways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gift of rainbows you call it and indeed you succeed in transmitting visions and emotions in rainbow colors that permeate your words dripping pleasure. This is the first time I see you use "thy" ... it gives your poem a touch of reverence to the source of your inspiration. Love, Margherita  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"will you capture my lens at the foot edge of swallowed eve and then stand wide legged in your jaunty gown above looking down at the heathen in my heart beating blade" Pretty intense stuff.....heathens need love to though....ya know??? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ice friend, thank you _________ Ms Mar, thank you lady friend _________ Ms angel, thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
not a pot of gold is my mind, but but a whim of pen reclined at the end of this rainbow where contentment for gold is less than at the other end where moaning songs are rivers bliss Your whim of pen is a pot of gold to all lucky enough to read. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern, you stir my grinding smile. Thanks lady |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thy rainbows proudly gifted to rainman of depths unknown treasured distance slowly closing seeking thus heart of gold |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...thank you ms |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...thank you (not sure why this is not taking....) |
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