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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-09-08 08:20 AM


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A place
You can sit
And do nothing
And be happy
Is home


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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-08 08:33 AM


Yes, sometimes more so than "home"!

I think we always look for such places around us, though we can find it also within.

Intense.

M

JL
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2 posted 2011-09-13 07:58 AM


I agree.  And sometimes that is great medicine.
Enjoyed.


JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Juju
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3 posted 2011-09-13 09:19 AM


yes
suthern
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4 posted 2011-09-13 12:15 PM


How true. *S*
Sunshine
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5 posted 2011-09-13 03:46 PM


And "home" can well be
a state of mind.

Enjoyed, John. Thank you!


flash
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6 posted 2011-09-13 05:38 PM


Yes, "home" can be literal or metaphorical which gives the poem extra resonance and meaning.

Enjoyed the read,

Al

MorningStar
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7 posted 2011-09-13 09:17 PM


Yes it most certainly is.  Love the truth and simplicity.

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2011-09-14 11:27 PM


Really enjoyed this one,
Ms. E

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