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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-25 06:42 AM



perhaps as you were being an artist today
painting sky in between clouds imagined
giving room for you to fit in between them
so eventually you would be on their sun side

and in looking back through the dark then
I wonder if it would be something feared
or perhaps just a different color in time
that you could get used to if at windows

do you think more often now of a dawn quixote
and how her armor would be more lovely around
those curves of her charms as she galloped
and if a windmill by chance unseated her then

would she mind a dragon offering her assistance


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daark

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-08-25 08:06 AM


Great imagination at play here, but that is common for you, D.S.

I feel she might shy away from the dragon's touch until he breathed the fires of passion on her.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-08-25 08:08 AM


Thanks JP....a friend of mine is a female Quixote but she attacks oil wells ...
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-08-25 12:14 PM


Mysterious, yet oh so captivating!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-08-25 12:40 PM


ms mar, thank you lady friend
ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-08-25 02:08 PM


A Dragon's assistance is always Darkly welcomed.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-08-25 02:32 PM


Ms E, I shall tell the dragon you said so. Thanks lady.
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