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Heartsleeve Went Home
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Heartsleeve Went Home |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Heartsleeve went home to her man unmolested Feeling worthy of the love he gave her She stripped off her invincible slow and sultry and spread her fragile before him He engulfed her in his protective affections Freeing her fragile she let loose her intimate Within his powerful hold allowing herself to explode knowing he’d save all of her pieces LGR©1/19/11 |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
When's the movie coming out? ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry who would you cast to play the role of Heartsleeve? And what would it be rated? |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nope. I ain't going there. No way. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wonderful...it echoes the masculinity of my own recent poem, though I hadn`t even read this before writing mine (promise!)  Great writing!Amaryllis |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Robin Williams could do it ... with an accent, but it would have to be rated "Family" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Amaryllis- Thanks and by the way,I loved that poem of yours. ____________________________________________ Ha ha Rex, very funny. Somehow I don't quite see Heartsleeve looking like Mrs. Doubtfire. And if Mrs. Doubtfire is starting to look good to you I suggest you sober up LOL! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now miss Lori ain't you just the provocative little spark plug of a writer.. Yeeesireee! Loved it Gal! Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
um..well..ah..yes, I have been known to write a provocative piece or two. They are gathering dust in the archives. Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well get out the swiffer and get'em out here...... Light up the page you're using and I'll drink the wine so you won't have a cloudy memory. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
Delicate and romantic, I enjoyed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thank you AlCowie Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...loved the title and the rest...James |
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