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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-08-07 08:14 AM



I would always be one to admire your eyes
just to keep from getting my glances noticed
while making those familiar observations
regarding your careful disposition of temptation

there would be those special occasions too
when your nonchalant would be loosened
exposing some of those heavenly revelations
that you prefer I don't openly speak of

and then there would be those other times
when your responses would be unprepared
for the rigidity of my obvious reactions
although unintentionally risen to attention

your glances might survey those dimensions
and find admiration could become detrimental
so you would journey up around my mind again
and spend a little more time there pretending

that is was just something in my eyes you admired


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daark (forbidden series)

  


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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2011-08-07 11:53 AM


Guess you had to be there, I'm loving that look in my minds eye.  
Wonderful to take that journey now and then and get lost in the dream.

xo

Sunshine
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2 posted 2011-08-07 12:40 PM


Aha...the eyes have it....




jwesley
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3 posted 2011-08-07 01:31 PM


Nice...really liked  the opening stanza in particular...

j.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-08-07 03:15 PM


Babyblue thank you for wearing the grin sometimes.


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sweetsun your eyes are smiles lady
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Jwesley thanks guy.

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-08-08 06:22 PM


"nonchalant ... loosened,"
"responses... unprepared" Liked much,
Smiling,
Ms. e

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-08-09 06:19 AM


ms E...your smiles are secrets,,,,thanks ms
Balladeer
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7 posted 2011-08-09 10:18 AM


I could have happily gone through my day without the vision of the rigidity of your obvious reactions....but it's clever.

Love the speil, stranger. I think my first experience into the realm of sensuality was with a VS gal. Too bad she wasn't there to enjoy it with me.

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-08-09 10:24 AM


Mug thanks deer, this one wears it often, kinda


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