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tuffluv66
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since 2011-05-13
Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-08-06 09:33 PM



When the wind blows,
its you running your fingers
through my hair.
When the sun shines,
its you smiling down
on my face.
When it rains,
its you
weeping for my pain.
When its cold out,
its you letting me know
your arms are waiting.
When the flowers bloom in the spring,
its you
showing your love.
When the leaves change in the fall,
its you showing the range
of your beauty.
When I lay my head down at the end of the day,
its you that comforts me
on your bossom.
When I awaken from that slumber,
its you
that greets me.
'When' is such a hopeful word,
but 'its you'
that completes me.


© Copyright 2011 Allan Boettger - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-08-06 10:47 PM


You are on a romantic roll tonight!
Lori

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2011-08-08 02:55 PM


No..you have that wrong.........
It is you who completes me.

*sigh*

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