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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-08-04 08:15 AM

sometimes when you write those things
I know you are showing me more
than just the skin I have admired

part of that shy place you spoke of
where it is harder to get to know you
there, where your heart mends softly

was it just coincidence, our timing here
how you arrived when I was dreaming
that there was more to your layers

than those fragile places you decorate
with the shimmering of sigh sounds
and the residue of the moans that occur

sometimes when you write those things

______________

daark (forbidden series)

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2011-08-04 08:59 AM

I loved this!! You say so much with so few words.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-08-04 09:41 AM

Thank you ms

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-08-04 09:48 AM

You are always amazing
how you take such innocent
pearls of words
and string such lovelies...

and when I see the word "series"
I always wonder...

when is the book coming out?

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-08-04 09:56 AM

Sweet sun. Thanks babe. The book is just a sleeve I am writing on.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-08-04 10:08 AM

You need to put a name to this poetry you write, Daark. I came up with a new form of poetry a few years ago I called septcouplet. You are so very unique you need to figure out a name for your unorthodox way of writing.

"sometimes when you write those things
I know you are showing me more
than just the skin I have admired"

Staggering in its concept, man.

~ If I agreed with you we'd both be wrong. ~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-08-04 10:56 AM

JP, thanks guy, you do me honor. I do call it whisperspeak. Like words between voice and thought.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2011-08-04 05:37 PM

I like your whisperspeaks.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-08-04 05:42 PM

thanks lady!!

Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

9 posted 2011-08-04 06:38 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmh ...
:----------)
Hugs and snugs
Daddy Goose

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

10 posted 2011-08-04 06:41 PM

Timing is everything isn't it? Liked this one a lot!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-08-04 07:12 PM

Thanks DB

________________

Ms angelbaby, thank you lady

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

12 posted 2011-08-04 07:14 PM

Whisperspeaks,
Nice word, nice title for your book when you decide to publish.

Ms. e

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2011-08-04 07:18 PM

thank you ms E...

doubt it will be published...just worn on the arm of a stranger...where sleeves belong?

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2011-08-07 04:50 PM

part of that shy place you spoke of
where it is harder to get to know you
there, where your heart mends softly

More revealing than skin... and more beautiful. *S*

I loved every word of this! *S*

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2011-08-07 07:36 PM

Ms suthern. Again you bless me.

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