I Saw You in the Window Bright (Triolet)

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Open Poetry #47

I Saw You in the Window Bright (Triolet)

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

0 posted 2011-01-19 05:29 AM

I saw you in the window bright,
A quick glance was all I did see.
I felt ashamed and hid my eyes,
I saw you in the window bright.
My heart beat loudly, I was shy,
I stood there much like an old tree.
I saw you in the window bright,
A Peeping Tom, oh my, oh me

~ Clones are people two ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-01-19 05:41 AM

Much enjoyed for many reasons.

Owl

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-19 05:46 AM

Thank you, Owl, for many reasons.

~ Clones are people two ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-01-19 05:56 AM

Smiles for many reasons.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2011-01-19 06:50 AM

Hmmm..had one of those once

M

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

5 posted 2011-01-19 06:54 AM

I hope yours was as innocent as the one in this poem, M. Thank you for being here.

~ Clones are people two ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-01-19 08:32 AM

You looky-loo you! You make it sound like the vision in the winow hijacked your eyes...must have ben something to see! Good write.
Lori

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

7 posted 2011-01-19 08:36 AM

Oh, it most definitely was something to see, Lori. Appreciate your comments.

~ Clones are people two ~

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